This story was submitted as an entry in the Naked Blades June 2015 Writing Contest.
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Nadia falls in love with Michael, her family finds out and she gets into a lot of trouble, she is saved by an unlikely entity.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, all characters are over the age of consent, most of them very much older. I do not approve of nonconsentual sex in real life and it is hard to write it even in stories, but sometimes to make the story go the right way, you need some source of conflict and dramatic tension, and this is where the darker part of my mind went, I do not approve of it in real life though.
If you are not allowed under the law in your region or intolerant to reading erotic stories, or sexual stories, or porn, then close this right now. Go on, do it, right now, I mean it. Ok so you are still reading. You asked for it, so don't complain to me about it.
Warnings/Tags: This story contains a whole lot of sex. It is more toward the smutty porn side of the spectrum than something with a story, though be warned it does contain traces of story, if you look hard enough. Most of this was written while the author was in a manic state of mind, as such it is very flow of thought, and you should not hold your breath while reading and waiting for a place to pause, if you must have a symbol to use for pausing use the comma, or you will die from lack of air.
Warning: has dark things, short.
Extra Info: It is really part of a larger story that I was not happy with yet so I decided to write a small part right now (a couple of hours before I post this) as time is running out, to slightly introduce a few characters, and also to limit myself to the fewest number of words for the contest. Might be continued and included into the bigger story if I have time to make it satisfactory. I may also post the bigger story separately from contest in its current rough and incomplete state, if there is interest for it at least.
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Nadia
I kiss Michael in the abandoned ruined temple, I feel his warm muscular body against mine, naked flesh against naked flesh, I still scared someone will find us here, my heart beating rapidly, even though I know nobody goes to this temple or its graveyard since it got desecrated by the other faith several years ago, it is a beautiful place now, a wild unkempt garden, as I hugged Michael back I felt the new ring on my finger, he had proposed to me saying he was certain he wanted me to be his and he to be mine for the rest of our lives, and I was so happy I cried and I really want that with him too. He is so handsome, beautiful sky blue eyes and golden hair that run half way down his back and he has really beautiful smooth skin and nicely built muscles, he is exactly two meters tall, if I stand next to him my head just barely reaches up to the start of his neck, I feel so safe in his embrace. He owns a large number orchards near my village, and around the world, supplying the world with exotic fruits and spices.
I feel his large cock against my belly, the foreskin opens up and I feel it dribble tears of joy down my smooth skin.
I break the kiss and moan softly, I had been dreaming of him taking me for several nights, I am still a virgin, and eighteen years old, my hair is silky luxurious black with high volume and it reaches down to my butt. I have brown eyes and what Michael calls an exotic complexion, darker than his fair skin, but not deeply dark, my family has lived in the oasis as long as anyone can remember, back before it grew from a little village around the oasis to the city it is today. I gaze into his eyes "I... I want you now, but only if you do not mind me not being a virgin on our wedding night."
Michael gives me one of his beautiful warm smiles "I already consider us married love, I promise I will be here for you and our children, you will want for nothing." he caresses down my back with one hand and cups my butt pulling me tighter as he caresses my hair and face "I can wait though if you feel it is important, but I ache to be one with you, ever since I saw your beautiful eyes in the market, I was yours."
It is custom for us to wear veils and cover our bodies, only our eyes showing, and despite that he had fallen in love with me hard, and I had fallen in love with him as well. Meeting secretly and he had been giving me gifts and we had been talking about our plans for our lives for a week, he said he wanted to take me away from my abusive family, to see the world.
"Michael I want you now" I said my heart beating hard and it felt like I had butterflies in my stomach. Michael gazed deep into my eyes and then kissed me again and then pushed me up on the thick blanket he had covered the altar with, he kissed my neck "I need to make sure you are ready first" he said in a softly moaning tone and nibbled slightly as he licked my neck and then trailed kisses down to my left breast and sucked on my nipple until it was erect and I moaned and caressed his hair and he trailed kisses and licks between my breasts and then kissed and sucked my right nipple until it too was hard and then he trailed kisses down my belly, my skin was glistening with sweat from the belly dance I had done as I stripped for him after he had given me the engagement ring. He kisses and licks my belly button and I giggle as I am ticklish and he caresses both of my sides in a ticklish way making me giggle more, he kisses and licks down to my silky smooth brushed and trimmed pubic mound, and he presses his face into it and inhales deeply and moans and gazes up into my eyes with widening pupils "mmm you smell so wonderful my lovely Nadia."
He lifts my legs up and spreads them and kisses both my inner thighs all the way up to my wet pussy lips, but not touching them yet, just breathing warmly and inhaling my scent. I moan and cup my breasts and play with my own nipples as he torments me so beautifully, finally he kisses my pussy lips, licking them apart "mmm you taste lovely too, my beautiful orchid." he says and licks and sucks on my pussy lips and clit and I moan, he makes me feel better quicker than I can do with my fingers, and the hot shower water spraying down on my pussy in the bath as I masturbate. "aaah mmm Michael ah!" I moan and he quickly makes me orgasm, it of course helps that I was already so very turned on, he keeps licking and sucking on me as I come and I arch my back and moan and pant hard as he pushes me deeper into orgasm and then I squirt onto his face and I blush and try to move away, but he holds my legs firmly and keeps licking and sucking and my legs end up hugging his head tightly and my entirely body is glistening with sweat and trembling. "Aaah please mmm Michael I need you in me, please."
He laughs his intoxicating and beautiful laugh and moans "mmm Nadia, are you sure?" he asks as he spreads my legs and pushes my feet up over my head and kisses me and I feel his cock rub against my pussy and I try to push up against him "yesss please" I moan out in an almost hiss. He captures my lips and kisses me and I get to taste my own juices from his lips and tongue, I taste like fruits, rose marmalade and spices. He keeps rubbing his cock against me as we kiss and then he presses the weeping cock head against the opening to my pussy and pushes into me slowly but firmly, and there is not the pain I had been told by my mother should be there, the first time and I briefly get worried as he slides all the way deep into me with his large cock "aah so tight" he moans as he breaks my kiss and I feel my pussy muscles clamp down on him and another orgasm hits me and I give off a whimpering cry, he is so very big and it both feels amazing and like I am being split open, not painful though, just intense.
Then he gazes into my eyes and caresses my face with both hands and I can see his pupils going wider and I can see my own reflection as the sun shines down on me from a the broken window and how wide my own pupils are and he starts to slowly fuck me while looking into my face, there is a brief sharp pain at some point and then a stinging sensation that remains but fades into the background and I watch his own face contort in pleasure and the love in his gaze as he starts to fuck me, I get lost in his beautiful eyes hugging his chest and around his back and digging my nails into him as he pushes me to orgasm after orgasm, fucking me faster and faster, always fully deep in me, his balls slapping against my ass and he moans louder and louder as he glistens with sweat as he keeps fucking me, then he suddenly slams into me as another orgasm hits me and he cries out "Nadia aaah!" and I feel his cock jump inside me and intense heat fill me and flow around his cock. I felt so extremely happy and warm and good and I gazed up into Michael's eyes and could see his love for me with a silly warm sappy smile and he leaned down, sweat dripping down on me and he kissed me deeply and lovingly and he stayed inside my sore pussy and I could feel his cock jump a few more times as he moaned as my pussy kept twitching around his cock, I never wanted him to leave me.
Then the door slammed open, and I looked toward it and I saw my three brothers and my father, and they all looked at us with disgust and hate, and before Michael and I could react they ran up and ripped Michael from me and slammed him up against a wall. "No please don't hurt him, father!" then my brothers grabbed me and slammed me up against a pillar and they soon had me tied up against the pillar and they kept kicking Michael, I heard bones breaking and I cried, pleaded, for them to stop. The sickening thuds of their kicks continued until Michael was motionless and then they stomped on his head until it broke apart and I was crying and shaking violently, they had destroyed my love, they turned to me and walked up to me "you are not my daughter, you are a fucking whore, to defile our family's honour this way." he took out a knife and then started cutting me, all over I cried and pleaded for him to stop, he grabbed my tongue and cut it out, to make me stop talking, he cut my nose and lips off, then my ears and ripped my long hair from my head with parts of my scalp attached still and he cut my nipples off and then he cut my clit off and stabbed the knife into my pussy, I passed out.
I woke up whimpering in pain, alone in the temple with the corpse of my lover, I could feel that I was still bleeding all over the place, and I was so very cold, everything hurt and I was unable to move and my hands and feet felt like they had been used as pincushions. The moon was shining its pale light on Michael's corpse, and all I could do was sob as the cold of night made my body shiver and my blood was slowly draining from me, the cold and the blood loss competing over who would claim my life.
Then I saw blood starting to weep from the altar, I watched in horror as the blood found the corpse of Michael and his body seemed to melt into blood and vanish into the expanding pool of blood and it then moved towards me like a rising wave, and the wave started to take shape and by the time it was in front of me it had the shape of a really beautiful woman and the blood turned to flesh, and before me stood a woman slightly taller than me, with ruby red hair and green eyes with really intricate and slightly glowing irises. She looked at me with sorrow in her eyes and caressed across my mutilated features "who would destroy such a beautiful thing as you." and her hand caressed down my body and then her eyes narrowed and she pulled the knife from me "I swear I will consume them" and then extreme sadness "you are pregnant?" she backs away a bit from me "I can save your life, and that of your child, but it might hurt a lot, would you rather I put you out of your misery or save your life?" she asked me and the blood from the knife flew from the blade to her lips and she licked it up.
Many emotions battled for dominance in me, extreme fear, disgust, sadness, and yet the strongest emotions were a desire to live, and shock from learning I was pregnant, and if that is true, it was all that remained of my love Michael, the fruit of our love, I tried to speak but it came out all muffled.
The woman walked up to me and touched my face and I felt a strange intensely painful sensation flow through my flesh and my lips and tongue grew back and I screamed out in pain "I am sorry, what did you want to say" the woman said to me with genuine sadness for causing the pain and compassion for my situation. "Save me and my baby, please, I will do anything for you, just save us." and then I started crying again.
"Alright, I will save you, my name is Ruby, and let's first get the pain to go away" she touched me and suddenly all the pain turned into pleasure, it felt really strange and I started moaning in pleasure as she started closing wounds, only the pleasure felt so wrong, like it really should have been pain, but I moaned loudly and as she worked on repairing the damage to my flesh I had several orgasms, and Ruby kissed my lips and the world fell away and I found myself in a beautiful garden and Michael was there beside me, we embraced and talked like nothing bad had happened, and watched the sun rise and set and he placed a beautiful flower in my hair and we talked about names for our baby, who we for some reason were certain were a daughter and Michael convinced me "Nadine, as it would be confusing if she had your name, but I want it to be close to yours, and I want you both to always be filled with hope." he also told me a few phone numbers and bank account numbers so I could use his money to raise our child. We made love in the last light of the setting sun and cuddled up as we fell asleep me on top of him on a blanket and with another blanket over us, him still inside me as we drifted into sleep.
I awakened hugging a long silken pillow between my breast and legs and I felt silk below and over me and laying lifeless beside me was this woman Ruby, naked like when I met her and I looked at her for a long time, she was completely motionless, and only then did I look around myself, the sheets were a deep purple colour, all in silk, and lots of variously shaped pillows, and around the bed is a curtain of beads, and the bed itself is huge with seven statues of women and men holding up a large mirror above us and I see my face is back to how it was before I got hurt, I touch my face and body under the silk and feel none of the wounds my father and brothers had inflicted and slowly and with much trepidation I remove the silk sheet from my body and look at myself in the mirror and I have not a mark on me, not even a couple of old scars from accidents as a child are left on my skin. I sit up and feel woozy and nearly fall back over, but I push myself to get up and I slide through the beads that make a beautiful rattling sound against each other as I pass and I sink into the deep soft carpet of the room where the bed is standing.
The walls are made out of polished granite, glittering in the soft golden light, it takes me a little while to figure out where the light is coming from, but the walls are covered with black vines with heart shaped black leaves that have a red kiss motif on the leaf and a gold, silver and rainbow shimmering border, the leaves seem to be what is giving off the light, the vines have flowers, berries and fruits of many kinds growing on it and my stomach rumbles and I start eating fruits and berries like some sort of ravenous beast, they all taste amazing, all are perfectly ripe and are the best tasting berry and fruit of their kind I have ever tasted, and there are many I had never seen before, there are also tomatoes, chilies, paprika, and a bunch of other vegetables, of the fruit variety, and pepper berries. Many different types of each, and soon enough I had eaten more than I probably should have, my stomach hurting from how full it was and I looked around the room some more, burping a bit as my stomach tried to adjust to digest all of that food.
The room was filled with beautiful art, sculptures, and several musical instruments and antique looking furniture. I find a wardrobe and inside I see many silk dresses, none of them even close to the type of clothes I normally wear, and they seem to be Ruby's size, there are no windows in the room, and at first I could not find a door until I found a part of the wall that was really bare, and about the size of a large door and as I looked closer I could see a seam around it and then as I moved my head I saw a hand print that shimmered in more colours than the rest of the sparkling polished granite and I touched my hand to it and the door clicked and slid soundlessly into the wall and I saw another larger room, dominated by an underground garden with many beautiful trees, bushes and flowers, not far from the door I saw a beautiful pool fed with water from a waterfall on one end and a hot spring some short distance from it. A few butterflies flew past me and I yelped as a tiger walked up to me and bumped his head against me and then walked into the bedroom and laid down next to Ruby in the bed, pulling her into a close cuddle. My heart was racing, this is like some insane version of paradise. The ceilings of the garden were covered with the same type of vine that lit up the bedroom, and hanging down all the way to the ground in places, gently hugging some of the trees, and in places reaching into the soil, and into the water of the pool. I walked over to the pool and saw that it was carved out of the same polished granite like the rest of the place, with small polished smooth stones in many colours decorating the bottom, the vine changed into a strange beautiful glowing seaweed under the water, and the water had several tiny colourful fish swimming around in it and I decided I needed a bath and stepped into the water, it was just right where you step into it, and cooler towards the waterfall and hotter near the hot spring, and I found a perfect slightly warm spot near some of the seaweed and touched it and my hand became covered with really soothing gel that I started to rub into my skin and it felt amazing, and then the little fish started licking me all over and I giggled and tried to make them go away, but they did not stop and I simply gave up and let them as it felt really good anyway.
I laid back in the water my head resting against the seaweed covered edge of the pool, and then I yelped again as a unicorn dipped its head down and drank water right next to me, I blinked, a unicorn, really? With a trembling hand I caressed his head and touched his horn and he let me do so. "Michael I really wish you were here to see all of this."
The End
Nadia
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