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The Chronicles of Ahlissa - Book 1 - The Midnight Maiden - Chapter 12

A young knight is given a quest to find and protect a maiden who will save the world.

Genres: High Fantasy

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Chapter 12: The Burning Question

The two young lovers rode across the island for more than an hour talking, with Brion asking Eryca many questions about her homeland - what it was like to live on an island, the creatures that swam in the Nyr Dyv, also called the Lake of Unknown Depths, and about the mysterious lost Isles of Woe rumored to have sank beneath its surface long before the great migrations. Lady Eryca answered all of his questions, excited by his interest in the land she knew and loved. Eventually Brion steered them west of Admundfort and the Earl's fortress, toward the south western shores of the island. Far off in the distance, Brion spotted the lonely tree that grew just where the grass began to merge with the sandy shore.

"Do you see that tree in the distance Eryca." Brion said as he pointed it out, "Let's make our way there and give the horses a rest, shall we?"

"I would welcome that Brion. After all, riding side saddle is not the most comfortable way to sit atop a horse." She replied laughingly, alluding to her discomfort.

They turned their horses in the general direction of the tree, making their way there at an even pace. When they were close, Brion reined in Armageddon, bringing the massive destrier to a halt. He dismounted and took hold of Druscilla's bridle, and held his hand out to help Eryca down. He was about to tie the horses' reins around the tree when Eryca stopped him. He watched as she stroked each horse's head and talked to each of them in the language of the elves.

"They will stay close while we rest ourselves."

"You will have to teach me that someday." Brion's eyes watched her.

"Hhm... Maybe...someday." Eryca smiled coyly at Brion.

A wide smile breaking across his face, Lord Brion took Eryca's hand and walked with her around the tree. They could see that a thick rug had been laid out on the grass along with some plush pillows for seating, ans two large baskets had been placed on the rug. Eryca looked over at Brion smiling at him.

"And what is this, my Lord?" Eryca asked, surprised and flattered that he had planned all this.

"I have no idea, but I suggest that we make ourselves comfortable and enjoy our stroke of luck." Brion laughed and silently thanked Astinos and the two squires for following his instructions so closely. Brion helped Eryca seat herself on the cushions and then sat next to her on his own pillows.

"Well, let us see what fortune has granted us, shall we?" He pulled the first basket toward them. When Brion opened the basket Eryca saw that it was padded with canvas and packed with ice. Out of the ice Brion pulled a bottle of wine and two fine glasses. He offered one to Eryca and uncorked the bottle. They smiled at each other as he poured her glass first and then his own. Setting down his glass, he pushed the first basket away and pulled the other to him. Eryca saw that this basket contained several plates and bundles wrapped in clean linen. Brion untied the bundles and revealed several kinds of meats, cheeses and various fruits and berries.

Eryca smiled, pleased with his romantic gesture. "It would seem that someone has been raiding the pantries." She grinned at Brion. "I'll have to have a word with Karolyn about that."

"My Lady, I am hurt that you would imply that I came by this without asking." Brion said, smiling. "Who is to say that Miss Karolyn did not know?"

"Hhm... Indeed." Eryca raised her glass to her lips.

Brion chose a plate filled with several different things. He picked up a large grape and looked at Eryca.

"Would the Lady permit me?" Eryca nodded ,smiling shyly as Brion feed her the grape. He looked into her eyes as he watched her eat and proceeded to feed her bites while he ate a few things himself. They sat like that for quite a while, with Brion feeding Eryca while they talked, laughed and enjoyed just being with each other. Finally Brion took on a more serious tone and decided that the time was just right. He put down an empty plate and rose to one knee, then he took Eryca's hands in his and looked into her deep emerald eyes.

"Eryca, my lady," he said solemnly. "When I first saw you at my knighting ceremony, I was utterly taken with you. Your image was burned into my mind's eye, and your beauty made it so that I could not sleep. Then when I found you in the garden all I could do was watch as you danced, I was completely taken with you." He looked down briefly to compose his thoughts and then looked into Eryca's soft eyes which had changed to a fresh spring green.

"Ever since then you have let your mark upon my soul, at the very core of my being. I find myself unable to be parted from you; every hour that I spend away from you feels like an eternity of torment. Lady Eryca Tandris of Walworth, I love you deeply. I am prepared to give my life for you and I pledge myself to you. Eryca would do me the honor of becoming my wife, Lady Eryca Grenwall of Ahlissa?"

As Brion looked into Eryca's eyes waiting for an answer, he watched as a few tears rolled down her cheeks. She smiled at him and nodded enthusiastically answering him with a breathless "Yes". Brion took Eryca into his arms tightly and kissed her deeply, their tongues found each other as they shared their love for each other. Eryca finally they broke the kiss and held Brion tightly.

"Brion, it is my greatest honor and desire to be your wife and your lady."

Brion smiled again and kissed Eryca deeply for as long as possible. After they had wiped away their joyous tears they finished their picnic while looking out over the Nyr Dyv. They sat with Brion on his cushions and Eryca on hers', cuddled up under Brion's arm. Occasionally they would kiss, or tell each other how much they loved each other. Gradually the sun began to dip near the horizon, so they packed everything on the horses and headed back towards the citadel.


When they returned, they discharged their horses to Matthew, who was excited to see that they had returned. The young boy could see that something significant had happened between the two of them. Brion and Eryca kissed each other and walked into the main entry doors of the grand hall.

They were greeted by a small party of well-wishers, including William and his wife, Lord Barnard, Astinos and Karolyn. There were tears, hugs and congratulations all around.

That night, William hosted a special dinner and the young couple invited friends and family to share in the joyful celebration. At the dinner, Eryca and Brion announced that they had decided to marry in the Kingdom of Ahlissa. William said that he would travel with them to attend the wedding, and Karolyn made it quite clear that where her Lady went, she would follow.


Within weeks the treaty talks were completed, and what became known as the Treaty of Ten Lands was ratified. All the nobles and ambassadors of the ten representative nations signed the document and vowed their support to upholding its tenets. Scribes from the Shield Lands wrote ten copies, which were signed during an elaborate ceremony, and a copy was sent home with each nation's representative. Lord Barnard and Lord Brion assisted William and Eryca with seeing all of the dignitaries off.

By the time all of the guests had left for home, William's fortress was put back in order and he attended to the business of the Shield Lands the coldest month of the year, Fireseek was upon them. It was decided that they would sail for Ahlissa the when the weather began to warm in the month of Readying. Meanwhile Eryca and Karolyn proceeded to pack and prepare for Eryca's journey to the Kingdom of Ahlissa.

Continued in Epilogue


The Chronicles of Ahlissa - Book 1 - The Midnight Maiden - Chapter 12by Lord Brion Grenwall

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