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A Life of Love - I. First Time - Chapter 2

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Chapter 2

The moon had risen early and was almost full so they still had light to see each other.  She gave him love-laden look which lit the night, rivaling the lunar orb in brightness.  Her smile was all-consuming.

“How did I get so lucky as to have a boyfriend like you?  I mean, I think back on my life and all the dark times...  I would have never imagined I deserved this.”  She gestured at them as a couple in their private glade.  “Sometimes I still don't think I deserve it.  But I am extremely appreciative of each day I don't wake up to find it a dream.”  She gave him a cherishing smile and ran her fingers through his long, dark hair.

He reciprocated, admiring Bethany’s long golden tresses.  With amused curiosity, he noticed the moonlight caused individual strands of her hair to appear silver between his outstretched fingers.  Struck to the core by the beauty of this detail, Severus smoothed her cheek with the back of his hand. Bethany caught this hand and pulled it to her lips to kiss.  

Severus spoke, his voice almost trembling, “I think the same things almost every moment of the day.  When we're apart, I’m musing about you.  When we’re together, I’m in awe of you.  When I’m having troubles, the mere thought of you helps me steer through them.  And when I’m happy it is either because of you or increased by knowing you’re my girl.”

Bethany made a happy humming noise in her throat and reached up to give him a light peck on the cheek.  Before she lay back, Severus put his arms around her and drew her into a cozy embrace.  He held her, rocking her gently for a few minutes.  Afterwards, he let her go and she laid down quite content.  

However, her breasts were still exposed and the small nipples cresting them pricked up due to the cool night air.  Severus couldn't help himself.  Her skin—all milky white against the darkness of night—shone softly beneath the watchful stars like a moonflower.  Her graceful curves reminded him of a goddess rendered in marble or a lithe nymph frolicking in a painting from the Romantic era.  

He reached down and cupped the orbs of her breasts with his large hands, enjoying their weight and abundance.  Severus began brushing his face over the delicate skin, just exhaling warmth onto the girl’s bosom.  Her soft flesh against his cheek reminded him of a silken pillow.  The amorous youth blew a light stream of air on Bethany’s shapely breasts, letting his lips graze their smooth surface.  He began tracing across her chest with his tongue, not just lavishing affection on her ample orbs.  Severus also tracked a course above them, just beneath them, and along her collar bone as well.  His tongue tickled her as it dipped into the soft indention right beneath her throat.  The sounds of her giggling only served to arouse him more.  He began to blow gently over the wet trails his tongue had left.  

She shivered with delight.  

Her response encouraged him to start kissing his way all around.  When Severus finally began to lick and tease her nipples, he could feel Bethany’s supple body responding by undulating beneath him.  The young man rubbed both her nipples gently between his fingers at the same time.  She made delightful little chirps of pleasure.  He squeezed, not too hard, and she moaned wildly.

Severus let his fingers run down her torso until they reached her bundled up skirt.  He deftly moved some folds of cloth, revealing her sex to him again.  Naturally, he glanced down.  After lingering for a moment, he lifted his eyes so as to gaze into hers.  For what he was about to attempt, he needed to see her reaction.  

He let his hand drift smoothly over the mound of her sex, sliding his fingers between her lips and lightly across her clit.  Bethany’s eyes widened, but he could not tell if it was from pleasure or too much stimulus.  So he moved down further until he felt her crinkled inner lips.  He toyed with them gently and began to circle the outer rim of her secret opening.  

Severus watched her face intently all this time.  Bethany seemed to be enjoying the sensations immensely, but she opened her eyes wide from time to time.  Her lover couldn't read her expression. Perhaps it marked her excitement at something new but it could also be a sign of trepidation.  Severus felt he should ask permission before he went any further.  After all, putting a part of him inside of her was even more intimate than what they had done so far.  But then he remembered how she always seemed to enjoy when he took initiative.  So he decided to test the waters.  As he circled, he took a chance by dipping a finger into her warm, open wetness.  

A shudder ran through her and her legs closed convulsively.

Severus felt guilty when he saw her astonished face.  “I'm sorry,” he said, lowering his eyes to the ground.  “I shouldn't have tried that without asking.  I just thought you might like me to make the first move for once, like you are always saying.  Still, that's no excuse.”  

Embarrassed, he couldn't lift his eyes to face Bethany.  He feared he had ruined the whole night and maybe even wounded their relationship by pushing her too fast.  Severus remembered his sweetheart mentioning that a few guys she dated before him had tried to rush her into more than she was ready for.  Hearing about her previous boyfriends’ lack of concern for her boundaries always angered Severus.  He never wanted to be one of those guys.  Besides being selfish and insensitive, those boyfriends were also out of Bethany’s life.  Their pushiness had been a big factor in her dumping them.  

Just then, Severus felt a finger under his chin begin raising his face.  Soon, he found himself peering into Bethany’s eyes.  He started to wince, but saw only compassion and a hint of amusement there.

“Don't worry so much,” Bethany said.  “Closing my legs was just an involuntary reaction.  You surprised me, but in a good way I assure you.”  She smiled at him relentlessly until he was coaxed to give her a shy grin.

“Please, continue.”  She lay back and stretched out, expectantly.

Tentatively, he resumed flirting and skirting the outer edge of her entrance.  Then, slowly and gently, he slid his finger inside of her.  The sensation was amazing.  It felt so warm, almost hot, plus it was slick with wetness and very smooth.  But, most of all, it was tight.  The walls gripped him in a sensual embrace.  Severus started rhythmically pushing his finger in and pulling it out, all the while imagining the finger to be a different part of him.  

Bethany sighed as he explored deeper and faster.  

Though he was enthralled by her pleasure as well as his own musings, a sudden recollection came to Severus.  Immediately, he curled his finger and began gently probing for his lover’s inner spot.  He found the secret area hiding under a ridge behind her pelvic bone.  The flesh there had a different texture and she gasped when he touched it.  Her inner sanctum immediately tightened, pressing his finger sweetly between wet walls.  

The ardent couple moaned in unison.  Severus began to rub lightly over the sweet spot again and again to the rhythm of Bethany’s staccato breathing.  Soon, the girl was in raptures.  Her ecstatic cries rose up the scale of notes until she hit a higher octave.  Severus couldn’t help feeling like he was playing a masterfully crafted instrument, eliciting the loveliest music from her passion.  Delighted by the melodious tones which his delicate strokes coaxed from her, the dark youth found himself awash on the tide of her song.

Finally, he heard Bethany say something meekly.  “More,” she sighed. “I can feel myself opening up.  Try another finger.”

Severus smiled a devilish grin as he obliged her.  He felt her bear down on him and moan as he slipped his middle finger inside as well.  Now both fingers worked her, penetrating in a rhythm which grew apace as she wailed or bit her hand to try to stifle the screams.  She kept imploring him to go faster, harder, deeper.  

Bethany was practically writhing around at this point but Severus didn't let that slow him down.  When it was obvious that she would soon climax, he bent his head down and with his other hand unveiled her clit.  He began to lick as she thrashed.  It was difficult to move with her or hold her still but he tried valiantly.  

Finally, he decided to finish her off.  As she reached plateau, he curled both his fingers up so they could push against the inner spot.  There they remained, pressing in an alternating rhythm.  He sucked her clit into his mouth and bit down just a bit harder than before.  As he did so, he pressed both fingers solidly against her hidden, sensitive spot.  

For Bethany, the reaction was like lightning coursing through veins of fire.  She stopped moving or making any noise, like one being electrocuted.  A shuddering convulsion ran through her entire body, so intense she was dazed by it.  Then the aftershocks came, each one making her body quiver.  

Severus could feel the constrictions of her orgasms against his fingers.  The tightness and release was the most amazing, previously forbidden, secret he had ever learned.  He marveled at this seemingly miraculous, yet completely natural, finale.  

Meanwhile, Bethany felt a wave of extreme relaxation fill all her limbs.  She lost her rigidity and became flexible and soft again.  However, she was unable to muster the energy to move or speak just yet.  That had been a big O, with both her most sensitive spots stimulated at once.  She lay there until Severus arranged himself next to her, watching her exhausted but dreamy expression.  Bethany managed to turn her face towards his and smile.  Severus appeared sparkle-eyed and exhilarated from the experience, as well as his yet to come release.  Even so, he lay holding her awhile.

Bethany stirred from their comfortable repose after a few minutes.  Bright-eyed, she looked up at Severus and said, “Now it's your turn.”  

He was somewhat startled by this.  Though he had wanted reciprocation from her before, he was now relaxed.  Besides, he thought she was currently more interested in rest than play.

“You don't have to, you know.  I did what I did because I wanted to, not because I expected pay back.  I know you're tired.”

“What?” she said, making her lips pouty.  “Aren't you going to give me the satisfaction of pleasuring you?  It's not fair for you to have all the fun.”  She smiled, a naughty twinkle in her eyes.

Her professed desire for him had already begun to arouse him.  By the time she had kissed her way slowly down his chest, over his abdomen, and then just above the waistline of his pants, he was quite hard.  The fact that her bare breasts brushed along his naked torso while she made her descent certainly helped.  

Bethany began to unfasten his pants with one hand as she rubbed the length of his hardness with the other.  He lifted up so she could pull his pants down, revealing his grey undergarments.  The material was thinner than his pants and showed plainly the generous size of his organ.  She had known this from touching him there before, but now she was going to get to see it.  

The excited girl bent down and kissed him through his underpants.  She felt a his length jerk beneath her lips and Severus looked at her, mouth hung slightly open as he caught his breath. The time had come for him to reveal himself to her.  He pulled down his undergarments.  The moon shone on his smooth skin as though on the white marble of an erected monument.  Severus’s member was long and of good girth.  Bethany thought it was the perfect size to wrap her hand around, which she did.  Against his large manhood her hand felt full and small, feminine and accommodating.

Bethany's hand began the slow up and down motions which had become so familiar over the past months.  She marveled at how soft and tractable Severus’s skin could be over such a hard interior.  It seemed as much a mystery to her as the inside of her had been to him.  

Bethany found herself so turned on by her lover’s finely-molded body that she could feel herself getting wet again.  His responses made her even wetter.  Severus lay back like a man incapacitated, though he looked down to watch everything.  He made little whimpering noises sometimes and at others he caught his breath or moaned long and low.  Bethany felt she had him completely in her power.  He looked so helpless and innocent that she knew she must be careful, even though it was she doing the more submissive act.  

Severus’s eyelids flickered.  He kept the same beautiful, rapt expression on his face.  His mouth hung open a little ways as if he couldn’t believe what he was seeing.  Finally, his head fell back.  She had quickened the pace.  He rode the building tension up until his head was all in clouds.  

Bethany decided then to do something she hadn't really thought much about until this time.  But Severus had willingly done it for her.  So no matter how inept she feared she may be, she decided to try.   While he was tangled in ecstasy, not heeding her visually, she leaned down and gave the head of his phallus a long slow lick.  She noticed a droplet of dew on the tip as she did so, then tasted its salty flavor.  

The moment she finished her long lap, Severus's head shot upright and he stared down at her.  Her mouth was still near its goal as he realized what she had done.  This was the first time he had felt the extraordinary sensation of her tongue touching his member.  

Now that she had his attention, Bethany winked, and began lapping again, this time longer and more vigorously.  

Severus's head thrashed.  He was in raptures and knew he couldn't hold back his inevitable release if she kept up this kind of intense foreplay.  He tried to think of anything to distract him from the delicious but overwhelming sensations of her tongue.  

Fortunately, Bethany stopped licking the extra sensitive head and began to run her tongue up and down his shaft.  Afterwards, she began dallying around the head, accidentally hitting the most sensitive spot on his body—the underside where the shaft met the head.  He convulsed and screamed, bearing his teeth as he tried desperately not to climax.

“Did I do something wrong?” she asked, concerned that she had hurt him somehow.

“Not if you want me to finish right now.  That, my dear, is my most sensitive spot.  Be careful with me.  I'm already half insane from the pleasure you’re giving me.”

“Oh,” she said.  “Sorry.”  Bethany giggled at the exhausted expression he made.  Severus started to lay back but she put her hand to his chest.  “Wait, there's something more I want to do and I want you to watch.”

Severus didn't know what she had in mind, but the little minx was probably about to wear him out.  Thankfully, she had stopped playing with him for a short while.  Otherwise, what she did next would have surely sent him over the edge.  She held his hard cock straight up and, opening her mouth very wide, slowly moved toward the head of it.  Severus rolled his eyes and moaned just imagining the gratification which lay on the horizon.  

Finally, Bethany took the head in her mouth and began to suck gently.  Severus released a long pent up breath.  He had little enough time to draw in breath again before Bethany began taking him deeper into her mouth with long, regular strokes.  His mind swam or, rather, floated like a flower fallen into an eddy.  He had never even imagined such pleasure.  The young man found himself wondering if the warm, tight inside of her mouth felt like the entrance to her essence if he were ever to experience that.  But he need not think of anything else now.  He was in perfect bliss.  

Severus felt her take him in very deep.  He could feel the suction of her mouth so tight and sweet that he groaned.  She took him in even farther a few more times until he knew he was going to climax.  

Bethany felt a doubled tension in her mouth and knew what this meant too.  She had felt it before beneath her hands just when Severus had always made her stop.  Now she had no intention of stopping.  In fact, she intended to surprise him like he had her.  So, just as she pulled her head up from the last deep stroke, she swirled her tongue over the tip of his cock and down to his most sensitive spot.  She probed and licked it firmly with her tongue.  

Severus no longer even desired to hold back.  He knew she had done the last little trick on purpose.  So he let himself be carried away by the feelings, like riding the crest of a breaking wave, which happened to crash into Bethany's mouth.  

The girl was startled by the sudden amount of fluid in her mouth, having expected it to be just a little dampness like she made.  Bethany pulled away with a mouthful of salty, slick substance.  She didn't know what to do and in her confusion gulped, swallowing it all.  She felt a bit funny for a second, then relieved.  She hadn't known what to do with all that liquid, not wanting to be impolite and spit it out as if she thought her lover’s taste unpleasant.  Actually, she found it to be quite the opposite.  

Severus, however, after leaning back to relax and let the tremors pass, realized he had given her no warning that he was about to ejaculate.  This meant she had no choice as to where she wanted it—turned aside from her on the grass, on her chest, or in her mouth.  'Damn!' he cursed in his head as the gravity of his thoughtless action hit him full force.  He had spilled it all in her mouth without her consent!  It was the rudest action he could think of a man doing to the woman he loved.

“What was I thinking!” he cried out in alarm. “Bethany, I'm so sorry.  I wasn't thinking.  It just felt so good, I let it happen.  I didn't even warn you so you could move your mouth away.  Oh, please forgive me.”  The tremor in his voice testified to his remorse.

Bethany, who had been mulling over what just happened, saw the moistness in his eyes. Instinctively, she reached to brush away even the thought of tears, running her thumb along his cheekbone.  Her face softened from perplexed to affectionate.

“Shhh,” she cooed.  “Hush now.  It's alright.  You haven't done anything you need to be sorry for.  I knew when you were on the brink of finishing.  I must admit I didn't know there would be quite so much liquid involved.  But I wanted to taste you, like I did that droplet at the beginning.  You taste very good, actually.  I just didn't expect a mouthful.”  She gave a half-laugh.  “It surprised me, but I didn't take my mouth away for a reason.  After all, you licked up all my juices.”

“I hate that I have to ask this,” said Severus, “but I was almost passed out.  What did you do with it?  I mean, did it make you gag or choke because you weren't prepared?”

“No,” she said in a kind of thoughtful reverie.  “I swallowed it.  I mean it surprised me and swallowing was just sort of reactionary.  I didn't want to be rude and spit it out.”

Severus just shook is head in wonderment.  “Are you real?” he asked.  “You're too wonderful to be any normal girl.  You're not a nymph come to seduce me and then leave me broken-hearted are you?”  He spoke with feigned skepticism and narrowed eyes.

“Well if I am, then you've tricked me with some powerful spell so if we are parted, I'll be the one with the broken heart.”  She paused, smiling slyly.  “You naughty wizard!  I know your taste for potions, so I can deduce what you've done.  It's not a spell at all.  At some time, you slipped me a love potion.  Though you must have done so a long while ago.  You're clever.  How long have you known I was a nymph?”

He laughed. “Easy enough.  Ever since I laid eyes on you.  Nymphs are too gorgeous and graceful, seductive and powerful not to be recognized immediately.  Why do you think I tried not to fall for you for so long?  I'm still learning magic, just a schoolboy really.  What hope did I have in trying to win over a nymph?”

Bethany blushed.  “But you succeeded.  I don't think you give yourself enough credit.”  Her last words fit into the scheme of their joking conversation, but her tone implied seriousness.

He thought about what she said and knew it was probably true.  However, the night was getting on and the air had turned chilly.  Bethany still had her top off.  Severus suggested they get dressed and hurry inside before anyone realized they were missing.  Bethany agreed and they huddled together as they slipped back into the castle.  

Continued in Chapter 3


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Nocturnal-Rapture

I am primarily a writer of fantasy, poetry, and short stories. I graduated summa cum laude (4.0 gpa) from U.T.C.hattanooga with a Bachelors in English: Creative Writing and a minor in psychology. My poetry and prose has been published over a thirty times in magazines and anthologies. Visit my gallery at DeviantArt.com/Nocturnal-Rapture for more stories and poetry.

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